17A - Elevator Pitch No. 2
1) https://youtu.be/aaTTn_5O7-A
2) The feedback that stood out to me the most was Luke Farmer's comment stating that I could have used the time for the elevator pitch to speak more about the logistics of the app and how it would provide the service. Autumn also told me that I should have raised the camera view to be more level with my face and provide a better angle during the video. I believe that I tried to do both of these.
3) Based on the feedback, specifically Luke's, I believe that the feedback altered my way of thinking about my idea. I am now more focused on developing the logistics of how the application will work rather than making sure the idea has the potential for success.
Hey Matt! I enjoyed watching your elevator pitch because it was succinct and clearly laid out the plan for your app. I agree with Luke in that it is important to figure out a way to incentivize students to actually update others about the seating. Besides that, your app seems like a great idea with very little flaws. Once this app takes off, you could even incorporate other spots on campus besides the library (such as Newell Hall). Great work!
ReplyDeleteHey Matt,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed watching your elevator pitch! I think that you really improved from your first one! You sounded much more confident and comfortable talking about your product. I like that you described exactly how the app would work. A suggestion for your next pitch would be to include details about the incentives for students to use your app. Great job!
Dear Matt,
ReplyDeleteI thought this elevator pitch was much better presented than the first. I could tell that last time you tried to make sure you had all the information but this presentation was much more confident and well rehearsed. I really enjoyed listening to you explain exactly how your app works and why it is beneficial to college students. Overall, great presentation.