22A - Elevator Pitch No. 3
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I
have posted the same elevator pitch this time around as the last one because I
received great feedback on how it went. I do agree with the feedback that I
need to speak about how I will incentivize my users more but other than that I
believe that this was my best run at the elevator pitch.
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I
did not change much in my pitch this time around but in the future, I will make
sure to expand upon how to reward my users for accurate information.
I do believe the pitch is better than
it was the first time as practice often produces better results but I find it
hard to get behind the idea of recording the elevator pitch multiple different
times.
Dear Matt,
ReplyDeleteI think this was your best elevator pitch so far. You sounded much more relaxed and confident in this pitch. I really enjoyed how you took the time to explain exactly why every college student has a need for this app. You definitely made a convincing argument to your audience. Good job!